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3. Methods
a. The role of agriculture engineering I believe to be the section where methods were address however I am not sure if there is suppose to be numerical data from the case study that you chose
4. Data Presentation
a. There was no data presentation- I think if you identify a specific flora you can add the data from that case study to the paper and provide tables or any other graphics already created if desired
5. Statistical design/analysis
a. Couldn’t identify this within the paper
6. Errors
a. You know more about this literature than I do but I would work on centering the subsections and formatting the paper to be more consistent throughout
7. Citations
a. All citations were in the paper and on the references page
b. There were a few sentences that I suggested putting a citation on that are shown in your paper
i. From the above information, it is clear that climate change is among the greatest environmental issues of the current time and the effects are felt in all fields including agricultural sectors (citation?).
8. Overlap
a. This paper outlines climate change on flora and current and past research that has been done on this topic
9. General Comments
a. Organize the formatting of the headers so all pages match
b. Proofread works for tenses and eliminate “which” by using different sentence structures
i. As a result of the increased temperatures, crops that require a lot of rainfall such as maize can no longer grow in the area (what area) and they (who) have resulted to crops such as wheat, millet and sorghum that(instead of which) can survive in dry areas.
c. Use an example of a flora that was affected in Africa to better support the current research
d. Better introduction sentence
i. The effects of climate change have influenced the world and resulting in a high priority issue facing all generations and future ones to come.
e. End on a stronger conclusion
i. Because climate change effects all walks of life from plants, animals, and people, it is important to begin the education process of our society and make tangible steps to deal with this epidemic.
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